especially Mr.Hiatus and RTSManiac
No problem, it's what we do best.
The main thing I see with this deck is that your defense doesn't support your offense. There's no real synergy going on. One Blue Tassels with a Nazareth really stumps your defense. You need to hurt artifacts on your defense. Also your defense can not really block well, not consistently at least I don't think. I think your defense needs a remodeling personally. You can leave 1/1 kings in there for your defense, but I would include TC enhancements to play off of them. Maybe do some 1/3 Pharisees with Pretensions/Casting Lots? And for brown you could have Image of Jealousy, Beheaded for gold is a great one. That way you can actually stall them off while your offense does work. Pair that defense with Magic Charms/B Shrouds and you should see some improvement.
On the offensive side I think you need a more streamline offense, and options. With every deck having CP I think the Sound the Trumpet's are kind of pointless. I would add some enhancements that work in battle, because right now Darius' Decree wipes you out, you know that. This deck has potential, it just needs more options to win.
Artifacts 11
Wool Fleece x3- 1 out for Writ or Shroud
HoH x2- one out for Shroud
Magic Charms x2
Unholy Writ
Temple Veil x2-1 out for another writ
Stalks of Flax- either add 2 more, or take this out
Sites 4
Nazareth x2
Promised Land
Dragon Raid
Good Fortresses 2
Wall of Protection x2- I see 2 being overkill, take one out for another Jacob
One last thing, I think if you keep your defense to self capture then you need 3 Zaccheus. Your defense relies on Raider's Camp, so get it out fast.