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I made this deck this afternoon because I was bored, and am just wanting some advice on it.
The offence is supposed to be very fast and can negate protection and discard all evil characters in a battle, and the defense is to kill battles quickly or stop them before they even start, and to move lost souls to opponent's territory

Battle Killer Deck: 56 Cards

Lost Souls: 7
Exchanger
Anti-Angel
Beggar, Shuffler
Site Doubler
Hero Discard
Speed Bump
Human

Domintants: 7
Son of God
New Jerusalem
Christian Martyr
Burial
Grapes of Wrath
Vain Philosophy
Mayhem

Fortresses: 3
King David’s Throne
Solomon’s Temple
The Gates of Hell

Artifacts: 6
Golden Cherubim
Burial Shroud
Chariot of Fire
Crown of Thorns
Holy of Holies
Household Idols

Sites: 2
Hormah
Golgotha

Purple Heroes: 5
Abigail
King Hiram
King Josiah
King Abijam
King Lemuel

Green Heroes :1
Daniel

Silver Heroes: 2
Michal (Kings)
Gabriel (I&J)

Purple Good Enhancements: 3
Prosperity
Reach of Desperation
Authority of Christ Promo

Multi Color Enhancements: 2
Sing and Praise (I&J)
Pentacost

Silver Enhancements: 1
Gathering of Angels

Multi Color Evil Characters: 1
Foreign Wives

Brown Evil Characters: 1
Uzzah

Orange Evil Characters: 3
Wandering Spirit
Trembling Demon
Deceiving Spirit

Crimson Evil Characters: 2
Nebushazban
Arioch

Pale Green Evil Characters: 1
User of Curious Arts

Multicolor Evil Enhancements: 2
Ashtaroth Worhsip
Prisoner Transfer

Pale Green Evil Enhancements: 3
Forgotten History
Leprosy
Death of Unrighteous

Gold Evil Enhancements: 2
Besieging the city
Wonders Forgotten

Black Enhancements: 1
Displeased Philistines

Orange Enhancements:1
Suicidal Swine Stampede



Any advice would be very helpful, though I would like to keep the splash and the battle winning defense, and any speed that I could add to offence would be great!

Sorry for that, just copy pasted from Microsoft word.

You have one offensive battle winner. That is a big problem.

This deck is very turtle, and the purose is to use cards like the exchanger lost soul and nebushazban to exchange lost souls, and than underdeck them to owners deck, with cards like Hormah, Ashpenaz, and have it impossible for the opponent to rescue lost souls, the rest of the deck is to delay the game, with cards like Burial shroud, and displeased philistines, and the offence to deck out as quickly as possible.
The purpose of the offence is to have Danial late in the game enter battle and negate protection to leave evil characters , band to Michal who has been set aside with gathering of angels and has angels sword on, bands to a king, and plays swift beings so that one of the kings can play AoCP, in order to kill every evil character in play, and than all the rescue attempts are walk ins, there is no defence to stop you, and failing that your heroes and good enhancments are recurable so that if they have a evil character in their hand you can still beat them eventually.

That is the purpose of the deck, sorry for not stating that  on my first post, and thanks for your input! If this deck doesn't work that well I will change the purpose and make the changes you suggested!

Okay, thanks! I have never played a deck like this before, and was just wanting some advice! I will try it out, and see how it does, thanks for the input! I put cards in there like burial shroud and displeased philistines to extend gameplay, and also household idols to stop decks like Isaiah, Judges, and Disciples, but I will see how this does, and thank you everybody for your input!