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The biggest flaw I see is a lack of soul generation. I wouldDrop:ChaldeansChristian MartyrWords of DiscouragementAdd:MayhemAssyrian SurvivorKing Jehoahaz (RoA2)This gives you three more soul generation options, as well as helping you drop DoU without getting Grapes'd or AotL'd for Survivor, and Mayhem helps boost the speed.Also, to help the defense I'd add Hormah. This fits nicely with SSS, DoU, and Burial, allowing you to shuffle souls in and give them very limited options. I'd probably say drop Destructive Sin for it, but it's a tough call. Also, I'm unsure of what some of those lost souls are, but */4 is a great soul to slow them from playing SoG/NJ when they need the win.
The biggest flaw I see is a lack of soul generation. I wouldDrop:ChaldeansChristian MartyrWords of DiscouragementAdd:Mayhem Assyrian SurvivorKing Jehoahaz (RoA2)This gives you three more soul generation options, as well as helping you drop DoU without getting Grapes'd or AotL'd for Survivor, and Mayhem helps boost the speed.Also, to help the defense I'd add Hormah. This fits nicely with SSS, DoU, and Burial, allowing you to shuffle souls in and give them very limited options. I'd probably say drop Destructive Sin for it, but it's a tough call. Also, I'm unsure of what some of those lost souls are, but */4 is a great soul to slow them from playing SoG/NJ when they need the win.