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Offline fyero

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constuctive criticism please
« on: May 05, 2010, 04:42:09 PM »
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i just recently made this deck and it is four and 0 against my brother n my dad

cards: 51
heroes:

Salome
Mary the Mother of James
John(p)
Ahimaaz
Phineas,son of Eleazar
Zechariah
Joshua the High Priest
Joiada, Son of Eliashib
Haggai

good eh:

Jordan inter
Holy unto the lord
1st fruits
passover n unleavened bread
feast of trumpets
pentecost
burning incense
zeal for the lord

ec:

Philistine Garrison
Prince of this world(orange)

evil eh:

Land dispute

Lost souls:

female
nt only
exchanger
reveal two
first rounder
doubler
antishuffle
hopper

fortresses

garden tomb
z's temple

sites

dragonraid
babylonian banquet
babylon x4

evil dominant

falling away
destuction of nehushtan
burial
cm

good dominants

harvest time
angel of the lord
son of god
new jerusalem
guardian
grapes

artifacts

urim n thum
altar of incense
holy grail
unholy writ
darius decree

criticism welcome please  ;)
« Last Edit: May 05, 2010, 08:43:39 PM by fyero »
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Re: NEW DECK
« Reply #1 on: May 05, 2010, 04:53:00 PM »
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i was thinkin that w/ this deck i mite bump it up to 56 n add in my babylonian defence (which i hav almost all the cards for) n take out the site lockout but i still dont know
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Re: constuctive criticism please
« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2010, 04:31:20 PM »
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the main problem I see is you have a certain Garden Tomb in it...  ::)

also, I'd look at Teal Tomb under the complete decks thread. it looks similar.

 


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