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At first I thought he said it needed more pizza. Which also isn't a bad thing. Everything is better with pizza.
I might not be thrilled if my opponent had his artifact pile near his Land of Bondage (which can be quite cluttered in a T2 game) and I didn't notice which artifact he had active until it was too late and I had already acted thinking he had no artifact active
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deck, discard pile should be beside each other
I'm also not a fan of evil characters being above the heroes.
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Lambo, I'd swap T1-2P and 2014 on that. Makes more sense to me to group nationals and year, and then group top cut and category together. Looks fantastic!
My issue with the second one: That artwork has no connection to the game, as it's never been used on a card before.
This is how long NATIONALS is on the left side:
The concept can be seen on my HD RTS background, but that needs improvement and refining to be used as a play mat. My biggest concern with this concept is that the finished product would look too cluttered.
The text on the bottom looks a lot cleaner now, Lambo! I'd still prefer to see just the Redemption logo with no splash behind it, but what you've done looks good.
That looks awesome! If you hadn't changed your layout I'd buy one. Your original layout was the best I've seen so far because it was very similar to the rulebook layout.
I think if you are going with a layout, the best thing would be to have the names of the locations. So Draw should be Deck, Rescued Souls should be Land of Redemption, etc.
The last word of "Land of Redemption" requires me to shrink the font size more than I'd like in order to fit.