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I don't think the ability is worded bad its just fine but looks a little interesting with the colonThe Maltese ViperIf blocking from hand paralyze and poison a hero in territory. Otherwise decrease a hero in territory 0/2. Cannot be negated.That's 20 words compared to 28 Its less of a difference if you have to clarify poison but I am assuming poison will be a keyword soon?
I'm not sure what is so strange...instead is almost always at the end of a sentence. I guess the strange part is that you can "instead" your own ability on the same card, though I don't see that as being too much different then insteading an ability on a different card (such as when you use Wrath of Stan to send all of your angels to Chamber). The colon is used to signify that you decrease the Hero only whilst it is paralyzed, similar to how the ability on a placed card after the colon is only active whilst the card is placed.As for Paralyze in general, we are making an effort to be very careful with how that ability is used. Because there are relatively few useful Healing cards (and almost all of them can be stopped very easily by CwD) putting a paralyze ability on a character that can block multiple times could be a quick way to result in an NPE, kind of the reverse of pre-block ignore, where a player has multiple characters that they cannot use. So that is why the paralyze part can only be used once unless some sort of trickeration is done to return it to your hand (for which there are a few options).
It doesn't need to clarify if decrease 0/2 per turn is in the definition of poison. Either way it will still end up being a shorter ability. It doesn't really matter because cards are already going to print and the ability works fine. The only thing that looks off is the colon at the end of the line not to big of a deal.So if you can send the set list to my inbox I will be happy to check for any unwanted colons
Quote from: YourMathTeacher on June 29, 2015, 08:30:41 AMQuote from: Isildur on June 28, 2015, 09:05:29 PMReally though the card is worded needlessly complicated ... I still think the card should be rewritten ...I agree with Isildur that Viper's ability is worded so strangely (with the colon, and with the word "instead" coming at the end of the sentence). Is it too late to try to simplify that?I'm not sure what is so strange...
Quote from: Isildur on June 28, 2015, 09:05:29 PMReally though the card is worded needlessly complicated ... I still think the card should be rewritten ...I agree with Isildur that Viper's ability is worded so strangely (with the colon, and with the word "instead" coming at the end of the sentence). Is it too late to try to simplify that?
Really though the card is worded needlessly complicated ... I still think the card should be rewritten ...
Quote from: Professoralstad on June 29, 2015, 04:20:04 PMQuote from: YourMathTeacher on June 29, 2015, 08:30:41 AMQuote from: Isildur on June 28, 2015, 09:05:29 PMReally though the card is worded needlessly complicated ... I still think the card should be rewritten ...I agree with Isildur that Viper's ability is worded so strangely (with the colon, and with the word "instead" coming at the end of the sentence). Is it too late to try to simplify that?I'm not sure what is so strange...As Isildur stated, it's the colon after the word "instead" that is awkward. Any SA that is out of the ordinary is always met with, "Mr. Harmon, what does this mean?" Remember that I deal with 6th graders, so simpler is better.
You guys missed a Half-spoiler in RDT's article.
Quote from: Red on July 01, 2015, 09:50:27 AMYou guys missed a Half-spoiler in RDT's article.Revolt? That was spoiled last week in another article.
Don't you think Epap is a little over the top with side battle cards?