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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #125 on: June 15, 2008, 09:12:04 PM »
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #126 on: June 15, 2008, 11:41:13 PM »
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Well, I just sent the chapter back to Pol, so I would assume it will be up tonight or tomorrow.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #127 on: June 17, 2008, 12:03:37 AM »
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Spy, you're at bat again. No guidelines for this one B)
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #128 on: June 17, 2008, 12:11:18 AM »
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Love your addition monk. Looks like I'm gonna get an et tu brute line :-p
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #129 on: June 17, 2008, 09:46:22 AM »
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GREAT job editing guys. at times I was really confused at what I was trying to get at, and you said it perfectly. :thumbup: :thumbup:

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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #130 on: June 17, 2008, 02:07:56 PM »
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Sent my next chapter thing. It may be a bit off on some grammar, but that is what you can take care of Pol, proof-reading. I think you will like the twist...
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #131 on: June 26, 2008, 04:11:44 PM »
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Forgot to post on here when Spy's went up. Josh's turn, no guidelines.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #132 on: June 26, 2008, 07:55:11 PM »
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i was waiting to see if It was my turn XD oy.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #133 on: June 27, 2008, 09:40:01 AM »
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I just realized mine was really short :-\

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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #134 on: June 27, 2008, 01:23:24 PM »
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Thank you very ymuch for posting it.

What do you all think? PM me your thoughts.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #135 on: July 07, 2008, 12:59:20 AM »
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Did this die? I remember sending in my part...
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #136 on: July 07, 2008, 12:39:21 PM »
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Did this die? I remember sending in my part...
I, too, have wondered that.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #137 on: July 09, 2008, 11:44:41 AM »
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I don't think I got your part, could you re-send it?
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #138 on: July 09, 2008, 12:51:52 PM »
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You replied to it asking what the email address was. I told ya just make it Mr.X instead of MRX@*****.*** If you deleted it thats ok, but I'd prefer not to retype all of it since I didn't save it.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #139 on: July 09, 2008, 03:58:28 PM »
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Ah, that's right. I'll see if I still have it.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #140 on: July 09, 2008, 04:01:56 PM »
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Spy's at bat, looks like Josh gave him a lead-in.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #141 on: July 09, 2008, 04:03:42 PM »
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overkill! :D
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #142 on: July 09, 2008, 04:16:58 PM »
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I am honestly open to suggestions as to how Chris can go. PM me your thoughts. I even welcome the advice of non-participants. I will work on the message shortly thereafter.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #143 on: July 09, 2008, 04:18:17 PM »
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Wow, I musta been asleep writing that, pol I sent you a more clear edited version.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #144 on: July 09, 2008, 04:19:14 PM »
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I think what may have happened is I got it, said "wow this needs a lot of editing," never got around to it, and forgot about it XD
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #145 on: July 09, 2008, 04:25:31 PM »
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Probably so. Sorry I forgot to proof read that before XD.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #146 on: July 21, 2008, 12:46:11 AM »
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RR is up!
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #147 on: July 21, 2008, 02:17:08 AM »
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As much as me and spy are going back and forth shouldn't it be someone else's turn? There used to be like 7 peopleish.
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #148 on: July 21, 2008, 05:14:25 AM »
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Wait, you did the one before...lol oops. I guess I switched you two around. My turn :D
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Re: The Aftermath
« Reply #149 on: August 15, 2008, 02:05:09 AM »
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I think its time to pick this up again.
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