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Offline adamfincher

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Song I wrote
« on: January 11, 2011, 05:16:28 PM »
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Re: Song I wrote
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2011, 12:57:12 AM »
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Humn...are you using a sequencer or are you recording a live performance?
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Re: Song I wrote
« Reply #2 on: January 12, 2011, 12:10:56 PM »
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Drums were sequenced. Synth was recorded through my POD XTL digitally with my keytar, and guitar was digital with the XTL as well.
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Re: Song I wrote
« Reply #3 on: January 12, 2011, 12:17:44 PM »
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Yeah, I could tell. Something to work on is locking in with your performance. Quite frequently you were off-tempo or the accents were misplaced with the riffs. I don't really know how to go about improving your rhythm other than playing to a metronome a lot.
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Re: Song I wrote
« Reply #4 on: January 12, 2011, 01:00:44 PM »
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1. Overall, simple, but not bad.
2. A bit redundant for my liking.
3. I didn't think the guitar at the two minute mark fit with the rest of the song initially, but it was better once the synth came back in.
4. I also agree with Pol that you were off-tempo occasionally.
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Re: Song I wrote
« Reply #5 on: January 12, 2011, 03:46:28 PM »
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Thanks for the criticism! I appriciate it! Tempo is hard. especially when you have to individually record parts. but thank you all for watching and advice :)
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Re: Song I wrote
« Reply #6 on: January 12, 2011, 06:17:35 PM »
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Quote from: adamfincher on January 12, 2011, 03:46:28 PM
Thanks for the criticism! I appriciate it! Tempo is hard. especially when you have to individually record parts. but thank you all for watching and advice :)

My grandfather has been playing guitar and bass for 40+ years (20 with bands), and what he typically does is record one part at a time on a multi-track recorder and then he plays the new part along with the other ones to keep them in sync.  I don't know if that will help you, but it definitely takes practice.  Keep at it, and I'm glad you are able to take advice.  It shows a lot about your character.  Keep up the hard 'work,' although I'm sure it's fun!

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Re: Song I wrote
« Reply #7 on: January 12, 2011, 09:08:30 PM »
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Yeah man thats how I do it too! its rewarding to see results and good practice :)
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