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Maybe if you expounded a little more. 

Such as...

Such as telling us what the book is about?

Or what font it is in.

I'm trying to make a new book, but I need help making the book longer, and with more details. Anyone got ideas?

I would add orcs; frankly, the more orcs the better.

Also you should add some Elfstones.

Throw in some white gold.

I think a few Drasnian spies would also make the book better.

How about a half dozen or so friendly dragons that allow people to ride them?

I am making a book about kids that get sucked into the Medieval Era by playing a game. I have a basic outline of the story and the main characters, but I always end the story in the first chapter. That help any?

I am making a book about kids that get sucked into the Medieval Era by playing a game. I have a basic outline of the story and the main characters, but I always end the story in the first chapter. That help any?

1. The kids predict an eclipse and are hailed (or hated) as wizards.
2. The kids learn something from the medievals and the medievals learn something from the kids.
3. Everybody dance.

I am making a book about kids that get sucked into the Medieval Era by playing a game. I have a basic outline of the story and the main characters, but I always end the story in the first chapter. That help any?

Is this fantasy medieval? (Dragons, Wizards, magic swords, etc.)
Or real medieval?  

Quote from: Gandalf the White on May 21, 2009, 08:05:31 PM

I am making a book about kids that get sucked into the Medieval Era by playing a game. I have a basic outline of the story and the main characters, but I always end the story in the first chapter. That help any?

Is this fantasy medieval? (Dragons, Wizards, magic swords, etc.)
Or real medieval?   

No. I'm using real medieval nations. There is no sorcery, magic, wizards, etc. No predicting either. Sorry.