Author Topic: Come on, tell me how bad my writing is.... (Read 1288 times)

Gil Galad Elven King *Generic · « **on:** September 30, 2009, 05:42:06 PM »

I want as many opinions as I can get, so go to my blog (link below), and read the part of the story I posted, then post a comment and let me know what you think. If you want to criticize it, make sure it's constructive.

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Smokey · « **Reply #1 on:** September 30, 2009, 05:49:24 PM »

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Gil Galad Elven King *Generic · « **Reply #2 on:** September 30, 2009, 05:55:17 PM »

hmm... I had the intent of this story being sort of a thriller of sorts, but I can see from your comment Smokey how it can been taken entirely differently all because of the way I wrote it... interesting...

Smokey · « **Reply #3 on:** September 30, 2009, 06:05:20 PM »

Seemed more like a love story to me, Thrillers usually don't have endings like that

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Gil Galad Elven King *Generic · « **Reply #4 on:** October 01, 2009, 08:13:33 AM »

That's not the end of the story though, just a part. I can definitely see where I need to define more in certain places though. Thanks!

Clarinetguy097 · « **Reply #5 on:** October 01, 2009, 04:59:39 PM »

I haven't read it, but it can't be as bad as my writing

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Author Topic: Come on, tell me how bad my writing is.... (Read 1288 times)

Gil Galad Elven King *Generic

Come on, tell me how bad my writing is....

Smokey

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Gil Galad Elven King *Generic

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Gil Galad Elven King *Generic

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