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I am Longsuffering - Counter to my Day of God's Wrath and Revelation Angels
« on: March 16, 2017, 01:03:56 PM »
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Opinions welcome!

NOTE: This is the card that this is made to counter: Day of God's Wrath

Spoiler: I am Longsuffering (hover to show)
« Last Edit: March 17, 2017, 03:26:52 PM by megamanlan »
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They seem pretty lame as fighters maybe we should challenge them to a dance off or a redemption game

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Re: I am Longsuffering - Counter to my Day of God's Wrath and Revelation Angels
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2017, 01:49:18 PM »
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Souls in the Land of Redemption are redeemed souls not lost souls. Also, the last sentence is a "do this to do this to do this", there are 2 sets of "to", was that intended?
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Re: I am Longsuffering - Counter to my Day of God's Wrath and Revelation Angels
« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2017, 02:59:56 PM »
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I keep forgetting that. I'll change it to Redeemed Souls.

I suppose it could be a then for the second one... but it is meant to be that you have to complete the first action to get the second one
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Re: I am Longsuffering - Counter to my Day of God's Wrath and Revelation Angels
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2017, 03:27:07 PM »
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