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Rage

Artifact

-May Be Activated On a Character-

"If placed on a hero, holder may discard this card to convert that hero to an evil character of an evil brigade you have in play. If placed on an evil character, holder may redistribute that character's abilities. While on a character, protect Lost Soul cards from rescue by dominants, unless all players have an equal number of Lost Soul cards in play."

Few word problems, and I really didn't like the murderer clause, unless you created a whole theme based on it.

Rage isn't an object. Make it a TC and word it like this:

"Place on an O.T. Human Hero: Character is Converted to an Evil Character in brigade of owner's choice. Abilities of character may be distributed as holder chooses every time he blocks. Protect Lost Souls from Good Dominants unless every player has the same number of Lost Souls in play."

A bit much. I'd cut either the ability distribution or the "unless" clause on the LS protection.

How about this:

Rage (UL)

Type: Evil Enh. • Brigade: Pale Green • Ability: None • Class: None • Special Ability: Two Evil Characters of 6/6 or less may band together. • Play As: Band any Evil Character of 6/6 or less into the battle this turn. • Identifiers: None • Verse: Psalms 2:1 • Availability: Unlimited booster packs (Rare)

or this:

Rage (P)

Type: Evil Enh. • Brigade: Pale Green • Ability: None • Class: None • Special Ability: Two Evil Characters may band this turn. • Play As: Band any Evil Character of 6/6 or less this turn. • Identifiers: None • Verse: Psalms 2:1 • Availability: Promotional cards (2002 District Tournament)