Author Topic: Redemption Redesign - Thesaurus ex Preteritus (Updated with Tier 7) (Read 9393 times)

Thanks! I tried a while ago to fit it under the scroll but that didn't work very well. I just updated my template with the artist credit at the bottom of the scroll.

Example:

Lamborghini_diablo · « **Reply #9 on:** September 14, 2012, 09:48:34 AM »

Another thing I've noticed:

Are you picking card art based on the title alone, or the scripture the card is based on? You said in the original thread that you wanted to make this feel more like a Biblical game, and I don't think Daniel 11:31 was talking about some weird mutant creature.

drb1200 · « **Reply #10 on:** September 14, 2012, 10:29:45 AM »

Quote from: Lamborghini_diablo on September 14, 2012, 09:48:34 AM

Another thing I've noticed:

Are you picking card art based on the title alone, or the scripture the card is based on? You said in the original thread that you wanted to make this feel more like a Biblical game, and I don't think Daniel 11:31 was talking about some weird mutant creature.

I don't know what Daniel was describing, but I don't think he describes what it looks like. It is "abominable" and that is all we know. I think it's fine to take artistic license in the artwork, especially since it is hard to find a quality piece of art depicting a horrible statue standing in a hebrew temple. The only card above that really isn't scripturally accurate at all is Consuming Fire. The story is really about an angel who points his staff at a pile of food and it bursts into flames. As you know, THAT is pretty hard to find in a quality piece of art, so I chose a picture of angels dealing with fire. Obviously if Cactus adopted this template, they wouldn't choose the same art that I would, but that's what makes these fun cards.

Lamborghini_diablo · « **Reply #11 on:** September 14, 2012, 10:42:17 AM »

Quote from: Daniel on September 14, 2012, 10:29:45 AM

I don't know what Daniel was describing, but I don't think he describes what it looks like. It is "abominable" and that is all we know. I think it's fine to take artistic license in the artwork, especially since it is hard to find a quality piece of art depicting a horrible statue standing in a hebrew temple.

Fair enough, just be careful not to stay too far into fantasy imagery if you want to keep the Biblical idea of the game intact.

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The only card above that really isn't scripturally accurate at all is Consuming Fire. The story is really about an angel who points his staff at a pile of food and it bursts into flames. As you know, THAT is pretty hard to find in a quality piece of art, so I chose a picture of angels dealing with fire. Obviously if Cactus adopted this template, they wouldn't choose the same art that I would, but that's what makes these fun cards.

Yeah, some cards are nearly impossible to find good artwork for. Though regarding consuming fire, Cactus managed to find some decent artwork that depicted the event:

drb1200 · « **Reply #12 on:** September 14, 2012, 05:50:55 PM »

Kings/Herods

Lamborghini_diablo · « **Reply #13 on:** September 14, 2012, 06:04:53 PM »

Two quick things

1) Salome's ability has a hyphenated word. While this isn't a problem, it's something you should try to avoid if you can. (Under Paragraph tools, uncheck hyphenate)
2) This may just be me, but there's a tiny black dot in your paper texture to the left of the third line of special abilities. The way it's positioned, my brain keeps seeing it as a period. That'd be easy to clone-stamp out.

Master KChief · « **Reply #14 on:** September 14, 2012, 07:57:37 PM »

The cards look amazing. Especially love Herod's Treachery and Dungeon. Keep em coming!

drb1200 · « **Reply #15 on:** September 14, 2012, 10:03:09 PM »

Aaaaand Tier 3!

TheJaylor · « **Reply #16 on:** September 14, 2012, 10:46:51 PM »

By the way, about half of the "Weapon-Class" symbol on Philistine Chariot and Horses is cut out by a horse head...

Lampy 2.0 · « **Reply #17 on:** September 14, 2012, 11:16:45 PM »

Quote from: KoalaKingoFA on September 14, 2012, 10:46:51 PM

By the way, about half of the "Weapon-Class" symbol on Philistine Chariot and Horses is cut out by a horse head...

I think the overlap of the art over the symbol is cool!

Master KChief · « **Reply #18 on:** September 14, 2012, 11:24:02 PM »

I also like the overlap! Break the borders bro!

Arrthoa · « **Reply #19 on:** September 14, 2012, 11:45:20 PM »

You put the ability of Herod's Temple on Herod's Dungeon.

Herod’s Dungeon (TP)
Type: Site • Brigade: White • Ability: None • Class: None • Special Ability: While blocking with a Herod while this Site is unoccupied, you may capture a male human Hero with strength 7/* or greater and place it here. When you block with Herodias, you may discard a captured Hero. • Identifiers: Israel • Verse: Matthew 14:3

Lamborghini_diablo · « **Reply #20 on:** September 15, 2012, 01:24:09 AM »

Overcome by Philistines is not weapon class.... it'd be rather overpowered if it was.

drb1200 · « **Reply #21 on:** September 15, 2012, 10:33:25 AM »

Quote from: Arrthoa on September 14, 2012, 11:45:20 PM

You put the ability of Herod's Temple on Herod's Dungeon.

Herod’s Dungeon (TP)
Type: Site • Brigade: White • Ability: None • Class: None • Special Ability: While blocking with a Herod while this Site is unoccupied, you may capture a male human Hero with strength 7/* or greater and place it here. When you block with Herodias, you may discard a captured Hero. • Identifiers: Israel • Verse: Matthew 14:3

Quote from: Lamborghini_diablo on September 15, 2012, 01:24:09 AM

Overcome by Philistines is not weapon class.... it'd be rather overpowered if it was.

Fixed

EDIT: Philistines updated with Land Dispute

drb1200 · « **Reply #22 on:** September 15, 2012, 11:00:36 AM »

Quote from: Lampy 2.0 on September 14, 2012, 11:16:45 PM

Quote from: KoalaKingoFA on September 14, 2012, 10:46:51 PM
By the way, about half of the "Weapon-Class" symbol on Philistine Chariot and Horses is cut out by a horse head...

I think the overlap of the art over the symbol is cool!

Quote from: Master KChief on September 14, 2012, 11:24:02 PM

I also like the overlap! Break the borders bro!

This calls for an alternate Attending Angel

Minister Polarius · « **Reply #23 on:** September 15, 2012, 01:21:24 PM »

Rock. Star.

Asahel24601 · « **Reply #24 on:** September 15, 2012, 09:33:56 PM »

I like the cards. Anyway,the card is Overwhelmed by Philistines, not overcome.

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