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I like it except that it has the same drawback as some of the previewed cards from the new set: The right side has more open space outside of the art/text boxes than the left side.Other than that it looks very nice (except for the text issue you mentioned) and if you can get those couple of things fixed I'd love if I could glomp on the template for my own card creations. (either that or I'll beg Daniel to "borrow" his )
1. The boxes are now different dimensions between your third attempt and the other
2. Pics more fuzzy and slightly wrong angle but almost perfect
3. The fortress sign in yours is bigger and wider
4. text for name is to fat and needs to be taller and skinny...er lol
6. Pink backgrounds are very different especially in how dark it is but some compare and contrast tool on it and it'll look perfect
7. both the verse print and the ability print are just a hair bolder and wider than the original(which I prefer actually idk about anyone else)
8. I think you need to put the cactus game design logo and artist in bold cause its barely not perfect in thickness so yeah!