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I think the card is very well done. I can see how the scripture and ability tie together. The artwork is awesome! The only thing that might need changed are the numbers. Most characters that search for a specific fortress have higher numbers. I could easily see this printed as is though.
Hey, if you want me to simply redo the visual aspect of the card to make it look even more realistic, you can send me that image (Guessing its from Archangels?) you used and I'll make it for you.If you don't want me to, like if you'd feel I'm just coping your work or something, I understand that as well. I just think the card would look beautiful if the visuals were done more like the real cards.
If you would like to see the numbers changed then post your thoughts and why and after a while I will update them.