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Redemption® Collectible Trading Card Game HQ => Redemption® Resources and Thinktank => New Card Ideas => Topic started by: dermo4christ on April 05, 2012, 02:30:09 PM

Title: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 05, 2012, 02:30:09 PM: Hello all,
here is a card I created. Let me know what you think.

file:///E:/Redemption%20Art/Custom%20Redemption%20Cards/Angel%20of%20The%20Handmaiden.jpg
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 05, 2012, 02:31:27 PM: not sure if i did this right....couldn't quite figure out the spoiler thing....let me know if you guys could pull this card up. Thanks.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: Warrior_Monk on April 05, 2012, 02:34:28 PM: We can't. Try uploading it to a picture sharing site, then copy the url of the picture (can be found by right clicking on the picture and then clicking "open image in new tab"). The put [ img ] (url of the picture) [ /img ] but without spaces and with the actual url. Alternatively, you can paste and select the url, then click the Mona Lisa picture (below the Bold icon).
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: megamanlan on April 05, 2012, 04:14:39 PM: Yep, do like what Wraith said.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 05, 2012, 04:35:25 PM: K. I'll try putting it up as you suggested. I just thought if you guys could just copy the link i provided and then paste in the address bar it would work for you. That's how I tested it. It worked that way. but i'll try your way...:)
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: Minister Polarius on April 05, 2012, 04:36:12 PM: We could if it were a URL, but you tried to link directly to your computer.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 05, 2012, 06:22:07 PM: oooooo.....my bad...sorry. Okay i'll fix tomorrow.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 06, 2012, 03:55:15 AM: (https://www.cactusforums.com/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.flickr.com%2Fphotos%2Fcustomredemptioncards%2F6903928660%2Fin%2Fphotostream&hash=7dcc72a73fd9c928c008b1236adaa9235c3c08c6)
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Hopefully this works now and you can view these. I used yahoo flicker. let me know guys. thanks!
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: Master Q on April 06, 2012, 12:55:11 PM: I am unable to see any of those. :(
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 06, 2012, 02:21:06 PM: ugh this is a pain....ok
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: megamanlan on April 06, 2012, 02:52:29 PM: Just post them to Photobucket and then use the [ img] [/img ] thing and it should work
Title: hopefully this worked now.....
Post by: dermo4christ on April 11, 2012, 09:27:35 PM: (https://www.cactusforums.com/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.flickr.com%2Fphotos%2Fcustomredemptioncards%2F6903952602%2F&hash=c7553ee8eeb1c4d2aaa6d4fe9948a6d98ac57224)
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Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 11, 2012, 09:28:15 PM: ugh nevermind...i give up...apparently all i got were "x's"....
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: JSB23 on April 11, 2012, 10:48:34 PM: Use imgur, you don't need an account to upload.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: JSB23 on April 11, 2012, 10:58:41 PM: Nope, you need a yahoo account to see it :o

imgur.com (http://imgur.com) Believe me.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 12, 2012, 12:30:28 AM: here goes nothin:

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Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 12, 2012, 12:31:11 AM: woohoo!!! Did it!!! Now, just let me know what you think....lol.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: JSB23 on April 12, 2012, 12:34:03 AM: Angel of the Handmaiden, Handmaiden and Drunken Deceit are all really under powered.

Fires of Hell is ridiculously overpowered. That + Watchful Servant = win
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 12, 2012, 12:35:57 AM: I knew Fires of Hell would be....but it's fun....lol.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: Asahel24601 on April 12, 2012, 07:21:35 AM: Also, Fires of Hell does not need to be T.C. it is already a Dominant.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: megamanlan on April 12, 2012, 02:07:28 PM: Ashael's right. Doms can be played at any time.

As for Roman Dice, it should be Upon Activation, and I think I'd like to see it do more w/ a 6-sided dice.

Prophetic Gift, Why does it place to a Prophet? TC cards only activate once when played unless they state otherwise.

Fire of Hell: It shouldn't be TC and you cant Prevent a game rule, I think you meant to say Protect.

Drunken Decit: The part where it explains what the * is should be an Identifer and it should be an X. Also Lots daughters are Female so it just has to say X= # of Female Characters in play. Other then that it is UP.

Angel of the Handmaden: First off the Healing Ability should just be worded as Heal a Hero and it's effect can only activate if it enters battle. It's also UP and wouldn't be used over Angel at Shur (which is the same card and person)

The Handmaiden: This should just be called Hagar and its really UP. There is no Sarai card (it's Sarah) and no one would use this card because no one uses Abram/Abraham or Sarah.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 12, 2012, 05:09:18 PM: yeah i knew some of them would be over/underpowered....but they were fun to make. I just wanted them to be as close to the characters in the bible and go along with the references as best I could.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: megamanlan on April 12, 2012, 10:13:59 PM: Well, I do that too, but usually can pull up some stronger effects.
I'd suggest looking at some other cards and making them a bit stronger.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 12, 2012, 11:10:19 PM: Was Bound Demon ok?
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: MattsterNinja on April 12, 2012, 11:16:07 PM: It would be good in almost any deck unless faced by an angel. The problem is that it will never get 1st strike.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: megamanlan on April 13, 2012, 12:00:18 AM: It's good, but I'd change the color of the ability and everything back to White because we can't read it that well.
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 13, 2012, 08:30:32 AM: guess i'll have to change that then.....
Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: dermo4christ on April 13, 2012, 09:05:54 AM: here are the updated versions of Roman Dice and Bound Demon....hope this suffices!

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Title: Re: let me know if i did this right
Post by: MattsterNinja on April 13, 2012, 08:53:46 PM: Much better.