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Dinah
« on: June 21, 2011, 11:54:44 PM »
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Dinah
[Blue Hero | 5/5 | Genesis 30:21]
Draw a card. You may capture Dinah to opponent's Land of Bondage to search deck for O.T. Simeon or Levi and add to battle. Cannot be interrupted.

Shechem
[Gray? EC | 6/9 | Royalty | Genesis 34:2]
If blocking a Genesis Hero, capture abilities cannot be negated. You may discard an O.T. gray card from hand to capture Shechem and up to two Heroes.
« Last Edit: June 23, 2011, 04:45:03 PM by browarod »

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2011, 11:27:16 AM »
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They're both really op, with dinah just go out solo and get any enhancement whenever.
Shechem makes everything a cbn battlewinner, and why is he pale green... magician?

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2011, 11:31:34 AM »
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The whole bit about X on Dinah is superfluous. Since it's "up to," just search for one and your opponent will randomly pick it. In essence her SA is "search deck for a Genesis card. Cannot be interrupted." That's pretty dang powerful, but not OP. Still, it doesn't really have anything to do with her story and is a rather generic ability.

Shechem is in the wrong brigade (or lacks a brigade if he's a Magician) and has a low-cost CBN battle-winning ability. I'd say he's OP.
I am not talking about T2 unless I am explicitly talking about T2. Also Mayhem is fine now somehow!

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2011, 12:43:46 PM »
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Shameless plug here...  I like the Dinah I created about a year ago.

Dinah - 3/3 Blue hero
Genesis 30:21
"If blocked by a male human, place Dinah in opponent's land of bondage to add Simeon or Levi to battle.  While Dinah is in a land of bondage, special abilities on sons of Jacob cannot be negated by evil cards."
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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2011, 03:44:47 PM »
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Removed the "up to" from Dinah so it's more random.

He was pale green before, I didn't see a reason to change him. What brigade would you suggest? Gray or brown? Also, any suggestions for balancing his ability?

No offense, but please don't post your cards in my thread.

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2011, 05:42:21 PM »
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Easy, Hoss. I like him putting his created idea in there. Gives you a comparison to measure your Dinah against.  How about this:

Dinah
 Blue Hero  5/5
"Search deck for a Genesis card. Cannot be interrupted."
"If blocked by a male human, place Dinah in opponent's land of bondage to add Simeon or Levi to battle. 
While Dinah is in a land of bondage, special abilities on sons of Jacob cannot be negated by evil cards."

Throws a bit of spice into the battle. What do you think about this?

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2011, 06:07:16 PM »
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I think that's too long for official cards, though the idea isn't bad. Thanks for the suggestion!

I don't mind people posting suggestions for improving my card ideas (like you did), I just don't appreciate people advertising their own cards in my thread, I don't think that's unreasonable. I apologize if I sounded harsh.

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2011, 06:13:14 PM »
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Combining the two how about:

Dinah
5/5 Blue Hero
Place Dinah in opponent's land of bondage to search deck for Simeon or Levi and add them to battle. Cannot be Negated.
Retired?

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2011, 06:35:14 PM »
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How about:

Shechem
"Anytime during battle, you can remove this card from the game to capture all heroes in battle.  if hero is protected from capture, they must withdraw instead. CBP."

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2011, 06:53:10 PM »
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Updated Dinah with a new ability from suggestions so far.

Updated Shechem to Gray and switched his ability around a little, hopefully he's more balanced now.

EDIT: @Ironica - That's an interesting ability, I will definitely consider it. ^_^

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #10 on: June 22, 2011, 08:11:08 PM »
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Ooh, I like the Shechem.  It falls in line with the Grey block scheme.  Though he'll most certainly be giving initiative away, up his numbers to help with Thad.
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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #11 on: June 22, 2011, 10:53:20 PM »
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Up them to what? 9/9? 10/10? 42/42?

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #12 on: June 22, 2011, 10:59:46 PM »
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Up them to what? 9/9? 10/10? 42/42?
6/9

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #13 on: June 22, 2011, 11:06:47 PM »
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6/9 it is, at least for now.

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #14 on: June 22, 2011, 11:39:12 PM »
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I think that's too long for official cards, though the idea isn't bad. Thanks for the suggestion!

I don't mind people posting suggestions for improving my card ideas (like you did), I just don't appreciate people advertising their own cards in my thread, I don't think that's unreasonable. I apologize if I sounded harsh.
I apologize for posting my card.  I should have phrased it as a suggestion instead of saying it was my card.  No hard feelings?
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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #15 on: June 23, 2011, 12:21:44 AM »
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I like Dinah so far.
Shecham might get better later on...

Dinah would definately be going in my Genesis Deck!
They seem pretty lame as fighters maybe we should challenge them to a dance off or a redemption game

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Re: Dinah and Shechem (reprint)
« Reply #16 on: June 23, 2011, 09:10:09 AM »
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I apologize for posting my card.  I should have phrased it as a suggestion instead of saying it was my card.  No hard feelings?
None. ^_^

How do you like the updated abilities?

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Re: Dinah
« Reply #17 on: June 23, 2011, 04:45:28 PM »
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Shechem removed seeing as the new set already has a reprint of him, lol.

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Re: Dinah
« Reply #18 on: June 23, 2011, 04:49:10 PM »
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Shechem removed seeing as the new set already has a reprint of him, lol.
Wait what?  Where's this?
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Re: Dinah
« Reply #19 on: June 23, 2011, 05:37:23 PM »
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In the "First Article for the New Set" thread/article, though I think you've found it by now, lol.

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Re: Dinah
« Reply #20 on: June 23, 2011, 08:14:31 PM »
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Yup, went looking right after I posted that on the faint hope that it might be there.  Imagine my raucous joy upon finding it and spending hours planning to combo off of it and all the new spoilers.
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Re: Dinah
« Reply #21 on: June 23, 2011, 08:45:31 PM »
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Haha! Indeed.

 


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