Since you noted that you took 1st place at a Local with this, are you looking for suggestions on how to improve this deck? Or are you more just sharing it for the community?
A few comments I have, and you can take them into consideration if you are open to suggestions:
I recommend cutting the deck to 50 cards. That will let you draw your SoG/NJ/Guardian so much faster. To do this:
I recommend cutting the sites. They probably aren't helping you get to 5 Redeemed Souls before your opponents.
I recommend cutting Jerusalem Tower and Storehouse. Same reason as the sites.
I recommend trimming the defense. 6 EEs in a multiplayer deck is on the high side, and is possibly why you feel the need for Storehouse.